Tuesday, April 12, 2011

An out of the blue sentence

My Journey To School.

“Smash”I accidentally slammed the door and walked off. “Matthew” my mum yelled, she scared me then I tripped down the porch.I had miniature injuries, but I was alright.
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  1. Toni NuaApril 13, 2011 at 4:48 PM

    Nice job Matthew - I think you might mean injuries though. This would be a great Hook!

    Mrs Nua

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  2. Kayde ( The Handsome one )April 14, 2011 at 9:34 AM

    Hey Matty...
    NICE piece of writing...I hope that your door didn't smash or anything though!!! Hopefully you don't have any injuries after falling down the porch!!! Your a tough guy and you can handle it!!!! 'KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!"

    From Kayde

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  3. Te RoimataApril 15, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Dear Matty

    I hope you didn't hurt yourself that much. Even though that was a great piece of writting.

    From Te Roimata

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