Tuesday, April 12, 2011

An out of the blue sentence

My Journey To School.

“Smash”I accidentally slammed the door and walked off. “Matthew” my mum yelled, she scared me then I tripped down the porch.I had miniature injuries, but I was alright.


  1. Nice job Matthew - I think you might mean injuries though. This would be a great Hook!

    Mrs Nua

  2. Hey Matty...
    NICE piece of writing...I hope that your door didn't smash or anything though!!! Hopefully you don't have any injuries after falling down the porch!!! Your a tough guy and you can handle it!!!! 'KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!"

    From Kayde

  3. Dear Matty

    I hope you didn't hurt yourself that much. Even though that was a great piece of writting.

    From Te Roimata


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