Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Smoking - Matthew and Kaiden

Smoking is responsible for lots diseases like cancer, long-term (chronic) respiratory diseases, and heart disease and also premature death.  Over 4500 people in new zealand.  People die because of smoking each year and it is the leading cause of preventable deaths.  The World Health Organisation says that around 9% of deaths worldwide are caused by smoking. The chemicals in the tobacco can cause cancer like heart disease or lung cancer.

Tenages smoke because every one is doing it or just to be cool. This is a really bad thing to do when you're young because your body isn't fully developed. Once you start it’s really hard to. Smoking can really be affect your health or even your life when you get older.

The government only allows tobacco because he get % out of every packet of smokes thats purchased.  That's why cannabis is illegal because the government doesn't make any money from it.  He’s greedy for money.

Teenage smoking isn't wright. It can harm your health when you're older.  SO DON’T SMOKE!!!!


  1. Kia Ora Matthew.....
    That was a good piece of writing that I enjoyed to read. I myself think that smoking is VERY LETHAL! You, I think have used some interesting speech and words like, respiratory diseases, preventable, premature and organisation.
    Keep up the good work!
    From Kayde.

    1. Thanks for the feedback Kayde, I'll be sure to comment on your blog soon.


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