Wednesday, February 8, 2012

The Beach is cold. Show not tell.

The furious breeze blew againts my face, as my teeth were chatering.While I was stroling down the hard damp sand."brrrr" I shivered In the breeze.I started to grow goosebumps and my lips faded to purple.

To Be Continued....

1 comment:

  1. Heey Matt,
    This is a great start to your writing hopefully there is going to be another one? , I reckon that you could have written a lot more than just though don't you think so? ,
    Keep up the good work Matthew and Go hard
    Cruz :)


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