This is a record of my learning during the years I was at Pt England School.
Wednesday, February 8, 2012
The Beach is cold. Show not tell.
The furious breeze blew againts my face, as my teeth were chatering.While I was stroling down the hard damp sand."brrrr" I shivered In the breeze.I started to grow goosebumps and my lips faded to purple.